possible corrections

Through this task there could be a a few things that i would want to improve on if i was granted a longer period of time to create the magazine.
Firstly i would have wanted to make my contents page look much more professional and i would also have wanted to make it incorporate into the theme of dance and DJ music genre more effective.
I would also have wanted to make the picture on the front cover stand out a bit more by making some minor corrections on photo shop.
However thought all this i am happy by the way that it has come out.

Another correction that i have made is that on my front cover around my staring artist there was a faint whit line where i hadn't cropped the image propperly, however after looking at the page printed out i then whent back and re-croped the picture to get rid of the line.

Another correction that i have made during this phase was that in my double page spread i have re aranged the pictures so that the are in a more apropriate layout and no longer look as if they have been thrown onto the page.